---===Day 1===---
Introduction
By the Effee Scribe, Quill
Since my exile from the city of the
Living Goddess, I've used my unique endowments to keep in touch with
Annalow. Annalow who's image burns in my memories.
Oh Annalow, the Mume city that sits
atop an imposible platue. On the sea side, her mountain empties into
a deep cave holding all docks and ships that travel from along the
world's eadge just to glimpse her magnificient. The climb, either
from her ramp at south or the cave up north, leads atop the
flattented mound entereing a city that swings it's two mile radius to
hold homes, buildings, and lush parks of blue, orange, and yellow
stone masondry. She basks under a tropical sun and her greenery
shines for it. She is beautiful, fore she is the capital city of the
Mume race and it is in the Mumes to always stirve to make the world
beautiful. Sometimes terrible, but always beautiful. And both
terrible and beautiful is Annalow's key feature, tho you would think
the platue should be enough. At the center of her circular
encumbrance stands a huge ebony tower that shines black with the sun
behind it. Mandra's Tower, the Church, that reaches two-hundred and
Twenty-one stories into the sky and houses the Goddess at the top
where she can look down and watch over her people.
As I write these words now, I sit south
of my beloved city, and although I was a slave in Annalow, the last
city of the world to allow slavery, I long for looks upon my home.
Three sylabals the house my heart and tease my long ears and longing
eyes. Ann-A-Low.
With my longings, you understand, I had
to keep in touch with my few but loyal friends. The most interesting
of them was Anna Goldeyes, a strange Red Gaurd of the Church of
Mandra, who's eyes were, in fact, gold and flashed pleasantly in the
sight of all children. The Red Guard stand as elite military who
police the magic of the Mume people and protect the city if it is
threatened. The Red Guard, crueler half of the church, but solid and
dutiful. They are like a trained bear or wolf, frightening to
outsiders and strangers, but a comfert once you realize they are on
your side. I have spied on them for my former masters and I have
judged them strong, practical, militant, and sturdy Mumes.
They're mirrored people, the White
Maidens, are kind, generous, wise, and above all else, strive to be
the bindings of comunity. All members of the Church of the Living
Goddess are womume, for in womume only could the Living Goddess
Mandra trust her magic, the feared magic to control minds and souls.
Heartmagi, a feared word describing both white and red members
womume.
Durring the events that lead to my
exile, Anna Goldeyes did an intelectual dance with my current and
brilliant master Drate Felfkin who now resides in a hidden felf
village to the south. I would speak more of him for I'm so very
devoted to his well being, but neither he nor the Felf race have much
to do with this tale, I'm afraid. Perhaps another day. Anna
Goldeyes made herself known as an oddity of the Red Guard for she
believed, like my master, that the guilt of one's crimes would be
precievable in traces left durring the act of the sin. Annalow has
one cardinal and strict law above all others, there will be no death
in the city. It was Anna Goldeyes' duty, therefore, to track like a
huntress the deeds done by a rogue Red Guard that damaged and snuffed
out minds and drove one poor White Maiden to madness. Master Drate
found in Anna both an ally in his own quest and, much to his delight
and surprise, a student of the art known as "Deduction."
The word was coined by Master Drate as
such "To deduct is to remove slowly and methodically that which
is imposible to find the gem of truth, however unlikely, that
remains. Even in the unstudy rules of so called 'Magic' there are
rules indeed that leave foot prints in the ground of reality."
Master Drate and Anna traded countless letters he would show to me in
excitement as the two created the idea of a detector of these
footprints. A "Detective," as Anna would come to finalize
the term.
The size and scope of Annalow would put
their theories to the test during the spring storms that occurred
five years after the bi-millennium. Tho the events actually began in
mid-spring of 2,003 AZD.
Intro 2
Death of the First Child
Everyone knows of the two cardinal
rights of everyone inside the walls of Annalow; The Right to Live no
matter what the crime and, barring the Effee race, the right of
property. To have our first and most guarded right breached on a
child, even if it is a slave or Effee or urchin, stands the most
regretful.
She was a Mume girl, perhaps 10 or 11
years young, found laying in a back ally in the north district. Her
enshrined corpse were found by Ixxar eyes, a set of twins that lived
in the richer of neighborhoods, but decided to take one of the city's
short-cuts, famous for trouble. The North district is not
particularly dangerous and so the alleyways were not such a great
risk, but the image the Ixxar saw force a scream from both of them in
unison.
The child was naked except for a single
blue lily placed carefully in her mouth. Her hands rested on her
chest as if she had just fallen asleep, and her elbows lay on a blue
cloth. The true dread of the site was her stomach, which was ripped,
bloodless, out and down the rest of her body, covering her from tummy
to knees. Everything was so carefully done that the murder raised
much interest, not just in the city guard who's jurisdiction it falls
under, but the locals, the rest of the city, and eventually of
course, to Anna Goldeyes.
The name given to such a villan capable
of this deed was "Lily Ripper." Race? Gender? Nothing was
known. We only knew that over the next two years, Lily would gift us
20 more atrocities, all alike. Some differences would be had, but
they were all Mume girls with face and lips untarnished to accept the
death-sign of a blue lily flower and they all lay on blue dyed cloth.
That was significant to Anna Goldeyes, she once wrote me, because
blue dye was dreadfully expensive.
Lily Ripper was the fear on the lips of
all Annalow, making the spring months dreadful and unacceptable.
Lily was a ghost, a blue shadow, Mumes would paint her as darkened
azure cloaks with fingers like knives and hovering over girls waste
high in waters that bore her name-sake flower. Each murder made Anna
Goldeyes angrier and angrier until she finally stumbled on the traces
of the killer.
Causion: Reading stuff for NaNoWriMo may cause your eyes to bleed. It certainly does mine, and I WROTE it.
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